Reviews
of Downsides of Fish Culture
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In the poems of David
Lee, the world of nature, impassioned, brutal, swift, is not just out there
in the Michigan driftsit is in here, in us. How powerfully we are made
to know this, beyond mere hope or reckless sorrow, is what I find most stunningand
most frighteningabout his poems. This is a poetry so alive as to be almost
ready to blow its seamsand would, but that it is governed decisively by
craft and intelligence. Instead, I hold on, as we must, for dear life.
Nancy Eimers
Foreword
by Charles D'Ambrosio
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David Lee's poems don't give us a picture of life lived per capita, life lived
in the conglomerate heart or regressed to the mean, life polled and made plural--the
old agreed upon world. No, instead, with these poems we are taken into the elusive,
the simple, the hard, the resistant world, the one beyond all accommodation
and comfort, the one we ultimately live and die in, singular as a pike with
a Zippo in its belly. As an undertaking, this is spooky business, very intense
and to my mind admirably quixotic in an age where wholesale numbness is available
for the asking. And yet it's only in this singular world, approached brilliantly
and without flinching in poem after poem, where at last enough clutter is cleared
away and, with vision renewed and made raw, miracles once again pass before
our eyes.
Some of the poems in this collection strike me as a mad search for the exact
right word, the precise language, the image that will briefly put a stop to
the need for searching altogether. Such a torqued up project carries an implicit
threat of apocalypse, which is fine. For one thing it keeps the language harshly
honest--you can't hurl pretty "poetic" phrases and hope these offerings
will appease the beast. Take "Travelling"--a poem that's all full-blast
like the Buddha, as a man once said to me, a poem that carries us out beyond
the "cardboard walls" of cliche and dead imagination, out beyond the
still lit porch light and the pockets of standing water into a vision where
traveling, speeding, the elusive green flicker of life itself, finds a last,
perfect adjustment of insight, so that the hope of arriving and having already
arrived achieve an exact balance--an exact, hard-won, fragile balance--where
adding another line, another word, even the merest sound, would undo the whole
damn poem.
There are poems here ("First Turtle") in which a calm reigns frankly
over the work as we negotiate the only legit deal language can make with life:
clarity; and then there are the architectural beauties ("The Downsides
of Fish Culture" or "Three Stories about Owls" or "1981"),
ambitious poems that explore layers of perspective or develop a sideways narrative
or test the reliability of memory. Again and again in this collection, David
Lee tears the vanity mirror from the precious hand of language and forces poetry
down a road more often traveled by fiction writers, turning the mirror around,
as Fielding said, and holding it up to life itself.
And in his work, there is a consistent and thematic mood of aftermath. Is Lee
giving voice to something generational? I believe so. How did we--those of us
in our thirties--come to be on such casual nodding terms with death? In "the
Auction" it is the young who arrive just in time to overlook the end of
things. The young in these poems are granted only a crude innocence, a sort
of trajectory. All that hard life, all the drugs, the screwing, the crazy escapades--a
proving ground proving nothing--unfolding in a world come to rusting implements
and the smell of constant death and the sagging dugs of a dignified old woman.
And this is why David Lee insists we see life in the singular, and why these
poems, vivid and vigilant, raw and urgent, speak to our needs. From now on,
in this finished world, our miracles will come to us out of the material others
have abandoned. Nowhere in recent American writing have I found such a marvelous
evocation of a generation, the first to be so at home with halfness and failure,
to accept the end as the raw material of life.